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Dear God,

Would you extend your holy hand to save a wretch like me? Would you bow your graceful head for someone who wants to believe? Would you bat an eye if I lay my life at your feet? Or are the hallowed halls of your domain only for the elite? Would you light up the sky if I asked for a sign? Can you spare any love for someone of my kind? I'm done with this life, praying it gets better after. I crave to trade in my tears for laughter. It's a lot to ask, in fact I don't know how I dared...but honestly, I'm just scared. I'm one of the many, who never prayed till I fell. I've never believed in heaven, but I know I'm going to hell.

Love, a depressed athiest
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:icontommyboywood:
tommyboywood Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Please see my journal entries: Does God care about ME? and Atheism (why the attraction) as well as my poem: Is anyone out there ?  :)
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:icontsundoku:
tsundoku Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Writer
You cannot leave everything to God. God has a lot to do.

If you're unhappy with your life, make a change. :)
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DeviantPirateQueen Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sometimes thats all i think is possible. really nice job btw
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darkparadise27 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
whos elite?
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:icon1nceephemeral2lost:
1nceephemeral2lost Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
wow, that is very well written
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dreaming-is-living Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2012
Thank you very much :)
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